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Keith Long's avatar

Real good. The seamless movement between “rooms” — all very good stuff

Slater Henatay's avatar

Very appreciative, thank you!

Helen Grover's avatar

I like how the complex itself functions meta-textually as something that conveys the anxiety exhaustion and desire to escape that all the inhabitants feel. Ben was a neat in text vehicle for allowing the building to function this way. Very cool stuff

Slater Henatay's avatar

I appreciate the analysis! It’s an honor, honestly, to be read with that sort of consideration

Adriane Lord's avatar

Awesome story 🖤

Emil Ottoman's avatar

Out-fucking-standing Slater.

Slater Henatay's avatar

That is much appreciated high praise, sir

Emil Ottoman's avatar

It’s a fuckin’ good piece.

Emily S Hurricane's avatar

This is so morbidly relatable

Slater Henatay's avatar

It’s honestly too relatable for me, and that alone bums me out hahaha